I promise to be better! Really I do! As a treat here is a short excerpt...
Also - huge change, I've renamed the heroine from Tatjana to Eliza...
Keep watching, I am contemplating putting up the entire first chapter right here!
"Eliza,
there you are! Come, you're having lunch in my office. It seems Mr. Rothschild
wishes to meet you." Her brown eyes went up and down me like a fine tooth
comb. Like she was looking for some flaw to call me out on.
Ashley
Harrison, though an attractive enough woman was by most standards overweight.
Though she looked as if she stepped out of a magazine herself, one could tell,
if they knew her at all, she was unhappy. All the expensive makeup, clothing
and shoes in the world couldn't hide that.
"Stop standing
there like a star struck teenager. Jack hates to be kept waiting."
I turned and followed along behind her, trying
to keep up with her long strides. Jack is
it? Not Mr. Rothschild. Sighing I figured working that closely with the
owner of one of his many fortune five hundred companies gave you the right to
call him by whatever name he told you to. If he said jump, you jumped.
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